Dagger of Doom: Fourth Post (Cluelessness)
This book is still painfully slow at developing the plot. There were some interesting developments in the last few chapters, but the characters still seem dreadfully imbecilic at putting together the clues they have. I'm not entirely sure where the plot is going, but some little things about it are clear. It is very frustrating. I find it irritating that the characters are so far from themselves in this book. They are almost caricatures of children written by an adult who doesn't actually listen when a child speaks to them. It's almost sad.
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rosepixiy) wrote,
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